This is awesome. I love how you wrote Hannah. Now this has to be my favorite chapter so far. I mean, Hannah bantering with Peter is just awesome. I love the dialogue. The parent thing was great. I LOVE it when Ben choked when Hannah said she met Peter though work. XD Also Ben meeting Peter lol "Not as good looking as me.” Yeah right XD
I thought this was cute and hilarious. Just great work!
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Date: 2008-10-17 05:04 am (UTC)I thought this was cute and hilarious. Just great work!
Jude