Amazingly, I was just thinking about the Complications Minor fic the other day and wishing you'd write more in this 'verse. And lo and behold, my Hanukkah wish has come true!
Couple of minor points... In the first paragraph, it should be "...wait in THE bedroom."
And a couple paragraphs later, when Peter is admiring Belle's outfit, it should be, "There was A thick black belt..."
Sorry, once wish_girl and irishlullaby switched on my beta-mode, it's been impossible to switch it back off again! ;-)
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Date: 2008-12-23 06:04 pm (UTC)Couple of minor points...
In the first paragraph, it should be "...wait in THE bedroom."
And a couple paragraphs later, when Peter is admiring Belle's outfit, it should be, "There was A thick black belt..."
Sorry, once wish_girl and irishlullaby switched on my beta-mode, it's been impossible to switch it back off again! ;-)